Tuesday, January 12, 2010

This Is An Original Piece


I wish there were bluer skies
and your eyes could look into mine
as you say
the right words,
exactly what i dream of hearing,
the pain goes away
playing my guitar to that same old tune
singing my heart out
just like i use to,
standing in a green grass scenery
and it felt just right
im writing this just for you and i
walking in an open field
observing flowers from all around
as the sun hits the ground,
but yet i feel no warmth..
i feel ecstatic-
youre like candy
but just as sweet
i keep trying to get you,
this is an original piece

2 comments:

  1. great writing for one so young! You will find him someday!
    You may leave comments on my earlier poems on my current blog.
    Thanks for this one comment!

    And for these lovely pix!

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  2. i love this idea *saying you are writing* i should try that out sometime!
    love the pic ^-^

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